Friday 8 April 2016

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  1. Anonymous18 May 2016 at 18:29

    Hello Matē, firstly I would like to congratulate you on a very creative use of the journal starter. It was also very intelligent of you to read your writing. Many younger children would be interested in this story but may have found reading it a challenge. You have solved this for them with your use of Screencastify.

    I am looking forward to seeing you extend your creativity in narrative writing with your choose-your-own adventure story.

    Cheers,

    Mr McAulay

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  2. Anonymous14 October 2016 at 10:09

    Ah, yes. I remember this story. I wrote it about 6 months ago.
    Of course, that was the first story I had written in quite a while. Could just be a BIT more informative, though.

    Thanks,

    Mate

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